I am delighted by your offer to join [FIRM, ex. XYZ Inc]. I find the position and job duties to be challenging, yet tailored to my abilities.
I would like you to know that I have recently received an offer from [FIRM, ex. ABC Co]. I am thus left with a difficult decision to make. [FIRM, ex. ABC Co] is offering me [STATE SUPERIOR TERMS, ex. a $34,000 salary with a 15% bonus based on my division’s sales.] I am hoping that you will be able to match their offer.
Please allow me to contact you on [DATE, ex. Thursday] so that we may discuss this matter in greater detail.
Sincerely,
